College+Essay

==== I always improve myself. I always tried to fix my mistakes. I was an ignorant child, but I tried to became independent. And I was became to had leadership. I was became to be outgoing. I always is nice and smile to everybody. And when I want to do a work, I will to work hard, to do my best. ====

When I came to America, I was felt very scared. I was scared to talk with teacher and American because It's my first time left my family to other country and I was shy. The first week, I couldn't to had dinner at dinning hall alone. But on the third week, I had courage from my parents and my friends. They encouraged me through the phone. I was became a good student, I was work hard. I tried to make some friends and to talk with my teacher. I stated to talk with teacher and classmates in class. Sometime, my teacher and my classmates couldn't hear what I talk about. I repeated that again loudly. Now, I am not shy to talk with my teachers, my classmates and some American.

 People know disadvantage and advantage about self are important. We can to fix the disadvantages and improve advantages. And I know those. I am always nice to everyone. And I almost have smile everyday. If today someone say something to hurt me, I feel angry, but I will not hurt him back. I will have smile to him tomorrow. I believe everyone has a bad day, everyone has some mistake. I trust people can changed. They just need a chance to fix it. I am nice, it make me to have some very good friends. So I am a kind person for people.

 I improved myself. On fall, I tried to be soccer's manager to improve myself. So I found the soccer teacher and talked with him. I became a soccer manager. I took care to the soccer team members. I brought water to them. Almost every weekend, the soccer team has game in other school, so I spent a lots of free time to took care to them on weekend. I like to take care of them because when I took care to them, I felt happy and I be more independent. One weekend, I went to other school with my partner because our team had game in other school again. I refused my friends' trip invitation. One day, a member fell down, and he got hurt. I took care to him. I took ice from that school to put on his wound. I tried to make him feel better. I brought water and help him took his bags. I felt I was became tpo have leadership.

 I was a nice and kind person. I was independent. I am a good daughter for my parents and a nice student to teachers. I always work hard and help other people. I am powerful. I believe myself. I will have a lots of development in your college. I will bring glory to your college.