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Immigrant is someone who leave their homeland and go to other country to be this country's citizen. America is one of the most immigrants country in the world. Many people want to come to America. Everyday have immigrants coming to the America. There have two kinds of immigrants, they are legal immigrants and illegal immigrants. There were too many differences between legal immigrates and illegal immigrates. Such as jobs, health care, and the identity.

Many immigrant come to America cause they want to find a good job, and also have a better life. Legal immigrants come to America cause they already had job in America, or they already had family in America. They want to earn more money in here and have a good life. Some legal immigrants came to America because they wanted to have a good education here. Also the other reasons are they like the American culture or American government policy. There are some immigrants who were illegal to come to America, is too hard to get there and also it's too dangerous. They imagine that they can find better job and better life in America. Many immigrant effect America's population, they make America's population increase very quick. They also effect America citizen's jobs, they took away the America citizen's jobs. They will effect America citizen's healthy, some of them bring sme drug and virus to America. They also effect their own health, they can't have a good health care by illegal identity. If they get sick, they can't go to hospital. People should not be a illegal immigrates. It's not be good for them to do everything in America. I hope there will be no more illegal immigrants continue to come to America. It a good thing for American citizens also good for themselves. Kitty, You have done a nice job of adding excellent details and showing that this is a cause and effect paragraph! Now you must work to fix the syntax (SVO) and spelling.